I had some
feedback from the teacher and from multiple students during the lesson, which
made me realize there were a lot of points which needed some improvement. So I started
on a new concept based on the first try on my sandwich photography. I came up
with the idea of ‘what people eat on their sandwich’ and made a setup with a
table, a plate, a knife, a fork etcetera. The new and improved photo is down
below. It’s not ready yet but it’s to show the improvement so far. During today’s
lesson I had more feedback and got more inspiration to continue the assignment.
If I may give you some feedback. It would really help me as a viewer to have a title for the improved infographic.
ReplyDeleteAlso, have you tried stalling out the products on the table instead of using cut-outs?
As I said in the big text part, it's not finished yet ;) I know it would help to put a title above it all or in the middle or whatever. I'm aware of that.
ReplyDeleteThe part of 'stalling out the products' is part of the feedback I already had today and what I will try out tomorrow / the day after tomorrow.
But thanks Joey!